This was our third attempt at creating a double page spread, various features have been added in this design such as the date/time feature, allowing readers to know when it is on, also there are sub-headings informing readers what they will be reading about and when, there are also more quotations boxes, enabling us to pick out the most important parts of the documentary and making them bigger with a different font so they stand out.
Problems - Similar to the first two designs the images take up too much room on the page leaving little room for information, also we feel the layout in this design isn't realistic enough because the date/time, and quote section being in between the text actually separates the two texts from one another and we did not want this. Also the title needs to be in a position where it can be the first thing readers see, it isn't big enough in the top left hand corner and from a personal point of view the first thing I see is the images; we want to see the title first otherwise the images have little meaning because people wont know what it represents until they see the title.
Overall the design is improved from the last two with added features such as date/time and more quotation sections, however it still lacks detail.
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